There be a shadow: Part 2

I had no intention of writing a second part to this poem, however, when a wonderful blogger, Radhika asked me the simple question ‘what comes next?’, I couldn’t help myself. So this is for you, Radhika. I do hope you like it. I’m afraid there may be a third part to it yet. And for everyone else, I do hope you like it too! Enjoy.

There be a shadow: Part 2
I freeze,
that can’t be right!
I shake my head and shiver
these ghosts are crazy
to think this house belongs to them
what would Marie think if she were still alive?
I lift my stick higher and get ready to strike
I still need to scare them somehow
I tread slowly, carefully
and strike a mighty blow!
Bang, it goes right through them and thunders the floor.
There, that should surely scare them
I take a deep breath and sigh relief
all my strength washed out of me
the old age catching up finally
‘Did you feel that?’ she queries with a nerve
Silence
‘Its like he is right here. It’s very creepy’
Oh God! I pray
give me the strength and once again lift my stick over my head
‘Go away!’ I scream and charge again.
This time, my hit lands
and something shatters
Not Marie’s darling pottery!

‘Did you see that?’ she dares continue, ‘I hope you saw that’
‘I did’ replies the male. ‘I did’
Good! I think. Now get out of my house!
I hear their foot falls walk away
I sure made my point I bet.

‘We got to get an exorcist’ she says.

‘I sure will!’ I mutter and walk back to the lounge. ‘I sure will’

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9 thoughts on “There be a shadow: Part 2

  1. Not bad at all! It is so cool to have had this wonderful conversation with you leading to this piece! The end inversion is seriously awesome! πŸ™‚
    Keep inventing!

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      1. I didn’t even know I was about to invert it, so the ending was a jolly surprise.

        Thank you for the follow by the way! It’s very encouraging.

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      2. Creativity is funny that way isn’t it? It’s wonderful to be amazed by the products of your own mind!

        I’ll look forward to your future posts with interest!

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