I & You

I
am simple
I am
thought provoking
I am thought
that meddles the mind
I am thought that
resides longer within
I am thought that resides
however long I need to convince
I am thought that resides however
behind the curtain of care
I am thought that resides however behind
a smile that spreads across faces
I am thought that resides however behind a smile
that provokes a thought in the other who may wonder why.

Amongst an array of human emotions
amongst an array of human
amongst an array
amongst.

I am simple.
A thought
within you.
I am You!

(A few weeks ago, I read a blog for the like of me I can’t remember who it belonged to, but the point is, they were writing poetry with one sentence/line they then removed the last word per line till they ended up with one word at the end. I found it very fascinating and had wanted to try it out. So here is my version, rather than removing one word per line, I’ve tried to add the leading word from previous line. I also felt I needed to tie the end off so tried a mirror structure with the latter half where I remove one word or so per line. How do you like it? Share some thoughts.)

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