Can the luck change
oh heart of mine
can I see the Sun
once raising through the sky of life
can the tides drop their deathly lash
at my feet for one brief moment where I stand
will I hear the beauty of birds
who sing longing tunes to the world
can this body bear the warmth of summer rain
and wonder why it had been so long
can the luck change, my love
can this life change for once
and let me in into the world
can I see the Sun for once
beyond the chilly gloom of winter
that has stayed far too long.
Can luck ever change, my life,
before the end is near?
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This makes me what to write a counter poem that is more negative. xD Great work! :3
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More negative, Lil? I thought I was being uber dark with this one. Lol
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Hahaha..yeah..this gives you an idea of how much more darker it can turn into…
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Damn. I don’t want you to write anything too dark. Writers need to be careful how dark we go. It can be messy otherwise. Lol
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