Carefree steps

I tend to generally write a poem that fits a novel in writing, and this I usually do without realizing. Must be the fact that that story will subconsciously continue writing itself in my mind. 

Carefree Steps is something I wrote and rewrote couple of days ago and it’s supposed to fit the new spec Ebony and Frank. But something doesn’t feel right or sound right. (The flu has muddled my brains!!)

Would love an opinion or two on this if any one is game. 🙂

Carefree steps

Into the darkness 

strays carefree steps,

the dying light 

sleeps amongst the land of promises

by morrow, the light will bring everything 

but home

which by and large you passed 

an age ago. 

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